To the experts - is this a worthy poem - Critique please.?

This has potential but like any good poem will need more editing. If you are talking about , virginity as represented by the flower, is a strong starting point. I would rework this, trying to incorporate a fixed meter per line and hinting at what happened without saying what happened. Draw the reader into the poem, don't send him a newspaper article. You have talent, now you need an editor's eye to rid the chaff from the essence. Good luck.