What do you think of my poem/rap about my dad being a hypocrite?

Life's a bitc*, LIVIN with a hypocrite, you think you're doin shi* legit, but it back fires and burns you in the pit, but you gotta say screw it, and push through the bull shi*, and if you don't wanna say it to my face, than karma is just gonna flip the script back on the stuff you just spit, cuz your deceiving words are meaningless, when it's you who don't commit, and the stronger person is... the one who out wits Sorry I feel this way, but that's just the way life is, when someone who has looked after you needs to grow up and let the anger de fiz, cuz when anger fuels, and you have thought you've won the duel, you've been defeated by someone who has planted seeds to grow more potent **** than you've endured, but only you, yourself knows that you've been cured, and you can change for the better and detox like it's an addicted chemical that's attached and withstood through the toughest weather.